Pitch

Feedback:

We received feedback after we delivered our pitch, for one of test shots we had Robyn standing in a dark room with a tiny light behind her to create a silhouette, it wasn't as bright as we hoped however we were directed to try use more lights in order to make the silhouette more defined and so you can see more than just the back of head. This will be something we experiment with when we begin filming.

Our animatic shows that we have quite a few split screen shots of both Robyn and her boyfriend lip synching in different locations. In order to be more creative we were told to challenge the conventional straight line and maybe consider using a horizontal split screen, this could help our video to be more interesting and different. 

One of the locations in our music video is a park and one of shots is Robyn and her boyfriend on a swing set we then cut to her alone. Again to be more creative and highlight that she is reminiscing and revisiting these past places, we could experiment with jump cutting for example when they are both swinging together, it could suddenly cut to her still swinging but this time she is alone. This creates clarity as it is more obvious she is remembering.

We plan to include a mirror shot when Robyn is singing into the mirror and the camera is behind her, to help relate to our target audience more we were instructed to experiment with mise en scene and possibly decorate around the mirror with photos of herself and friends and her boyfriend. This would therefore make it more pleasing and beautiful and the target audience will be able to relate more as they see her as just an ordinary girl who has gone through a break up.