Second Draft.

This is the second draft of our music video. We were successful at filling in the gaps where we needed more footage and adding the black and white effect to the scenes where Robin is in the present day and by herself. We were also successful with adding other effects such as dissolves and fade out to smoothy transition between different scenes. We continued to think carefully about our mise en scene by thinking of what part of our locations to film at and what the artists are wearing, for example clothes like jeans and denim jackets that relate to the target audience. 

We were also given feedback on our second draft which commented on use of mise en scene. We included a split screen where Robin and her boyfriend are lip synching at different locations to symbolise how they are no longer together, however as this was our only split screen throughout the entire video we were told it would look random and we would either need more of it or to get rid of it. In the end we decided to create another superimposition which features more than once in our video. Another thing we needed to improve on was the clip reversal which needed to cut to the beat.

All these improvements needed to be done for our final deadline.