Music Video First Draft

This is our first draft of our music video. We believe that we were successful with lighting, especially with the wave projector shots as they reflect the words from the song and the water imagery used. We were also successful at filming at most of our locations and using them creatively, for example when we filmed in London we used a lot of the space and different angles. We were also successful with mise en scene, making sure that the costumes were different when appropriate and using different parts of the locations, not just staying in one place. We were able to add some effects to our video where appropriate, such as the reverse when she is walking and when he is rolling the bowling ball. This was to make things more interesting and appeal to the indie genre.We were also successful with targeting our audience, this has been done with the costume which is easily relatable and suits the genre. 

To improve our music video we need to film more in order to fill up the video and get rid of the blanks. We need to add more effects such as reverse, slow motion and changing the colour like we agreed to do. We need to experiment more with our camerawork, mise en scene and editing in order to make it more creative and interesting.